VERONICA'S TEST
By Bob French
The door slid open with a hiss and the young man stepped back to
allow the pretty looking woman onto the bus. She smiled her thanks
at him and went to the back of the bus and sat down. The traffic in
and around Rayleigh was light and they had soon left suburbia behind them.
As
she glanced aimlessly out of the window at the beautiful Essex
countryside, a feeling of apprehension crept over her as though she was being
watched. When her senses had reached a state where she was starting
to feel uncomfortable, she stole a quick glance around the bus, only to catch a
young man looking at her over his newspaper. She briefly returned
his gaze with a smile and felt herself blush. Without thinking she
quickly pretended to rummage through her handbag, only to find as she returned
to the upright position that he was still looking at her.
The
bus slowly pulled into Chelmsford Bus Station and he left the bus, but not
before taking one last glance back at her. She felt a smile creep
across her face as their eyes met. Then he was gone.
As
the luxury coach twisted and turned its way through the countryside she felt
pleased with herself that someone had actually noticed her. Forty
minutes later, the X30 pulled up outside the terminal at Stansted International
Airport . All
of a sudden panic took hold of the travellers, followed by a mad rush to the
front exit as though the rear of the bus had suddenly caught fire.
When
her surroundings had fallen silent; she slowly got up, adjusted her skirt,
picked up her red handbag and made her way forward. The cool fresh
air, which had a hint of aircraft fuel, rushed up at her as she carefully
stepped off the coach.
Satisfied she had made it safely down
the steps, she took a deep breath, adjusted the grip on her handbag and walked
through the large glass doors into the vacuum of the main airport concourse;
her high heels clicking as they made contact with the marble floor. This was a
new venture for her in her quest to gain more confidence and overcome her
shyness. She had visited Lakeside
and Blue-water, but was aware that people who frequented those places were more
interested in shopping than people watching. Standsted was the real
test. People with time on their hands, people watched. If
she could get through the first hour or so, then she knew she would be ready.
There was a queue at the Costa Coffee
Bar, so continued to casually walk further along the arcade until she found
what looked like the airport lounge. It was quieter there and she
could sit down and enjoy the view. A waiter, a tall dark haired boy,
who spoke with a heavy Italian accent approached her and asked if he could take
her order.
“I think I will have a Latte
please.” She saw the expression change on his face, so coughed
politely to clear her throat. “With a jam doughnut.” He smiled and
thanked her. When he left, she made a mental note and reached into
her handbag for her mouth spray.
It didn’t take long before she had
joined the dozens of bored passengers, with time on their hands, to start to
stare at passers-by. A couple of women walked by and she carefully analysed
their clothes, then stole a quick smiled as she watched them disappear into the
crowd, pleased that she had worn the right clothes.
A muffled roaring sound made her turn
and stare out of the panoramic full-length windows at an aircraft taking off
into the wide blue sky to some exotic and wonderful place she
thought. It held her imagination until the clunk of a china cup and
saucer on the table brought her back from far away and she looked up at the
young waiter. She smiled at him, realising that he had doused
himself with some aftershave and combed his hair.
“Three pounds fifty
madam.” He held her eye contact for a second too long, then she
noticed, as he slid the bill across the table, that he had written his
telephone number on the bottom of it. Feeling herself blush again,
she fumbled in her handbag; paid the young waiter and pocketed the receipt. Her
confidence was getting stronger and it made her feel good. The
coffee was too hot and the jam doughnut stale, but after finishing it, she
returned to watching the people walk aimlessly past the lounge
Just after mid-day she began to feel
anxious. She knew it would come sooner or later and her previous
experiences had proven a little frightening. After putting it off
for ten minutes, she finally plucked up enough courage and made her way to the
toilet. If there was one thing she disliked; it was being confined
in a small perfumed filled room with a group of load mouthed women all shouting
at once. ‘Maybe it will be different at an airport,’ she thought but was
instantly disappointed as she pushed the inner door open. The smell
nearly took her breath away as the mixture of body odour and perfume hit the
back of her throat. The women in there were all tussling for space
in front of the large mirror. No one noticed her as she quickly
found a cubical and closed the door; carefully inspecting the toilet seat
before making herself comfortable. The screeching from the women
continued until she heard the door swished, then silence, which was pleasing in
a way.
Confident the toilet was empty, she
made her way to the row of basins and began inspecting her clothing and adjusting
her hair a little when she heard the door swish again. Glancing at
the mirror she saw a smartly suited young woman enter and quickly move towards
the basins. ‘Twenty fiveish, business exec,’ she thought. The young
woman leant against the basin and hastily emptied the contents of her handbag
onto the side of the basin. A quick glance at the various containers told her
that this young woman shopped at the expensive end of the make-up market
“Off to somewhere
nice?” The question caught her off guard as the young exec brushed
her cheeks with her rouge brush.
“No just seeing someone
off. What about you?” She caught the look in the young
girls face. It was her eyes; they were sad. She didn’t speak for a
few seconds, then turned and looked at her in the mirror.
“Monaco for a dirty weekend.”
“Oh, lucky you. I wish I was young
again.” The young exec turned, folded her arms and leant against the
basins and studied the tiled floor.
“No, it’s not fun. He’s
married with three kids and a large house in Kingston . I’m just his
plaything.” She leant across and put her hand on the young girl's
sleeve and gently squeezed it.
“I’m sorry my dear. Do you
think he will ever leave his wife and family?” The young exec gave a
sigh.
“He keeps saying he will, but I don’t
think it will ever come to that.”
“What’s your name dear?”
“Jillian, and yours?”
“Veronica.” She paused for
a second then turned to Jillian. “Then why not leave him. You have
your passport and a return ticket?” Jillian looked up with a frown.
“Simple really. Once you’ve got settled into your hotel, tell him that you are
going out to get some fresh air; grab your suitcase, tell the reception that
you are booking out and then go off and find another hotel and enjoy yourself.”
She could see a faint smile creep across her face.
“Thanks, Veronica. You’ve
just opened my eyes.” Gave her a peck on the cheek, scooped up the discarded
make-up containers into her handbag and made her way to the door, then turned.
“By the way, you’ve got lovely hair.”
The door swished and she was gone. The toilet was silent again as she once
again tried to inspect her make-up. ‘Time to move on,’ she thought
and calmly made her way back out into the brilliant sunlit concourse.
The Airport Bar was nearly empty as
she swivelled onto the stool and leant back against it; carefully crossed her
legs and staring out at the moving masses. Suddenly someone caught
her eye. He was middle-aged, dark hair and deep brown
eyes. He looked out of place in his heavy black leather three
quarter length coat. She thought nothing of it and carried on
observing the swarms that moved in all directions; some purposefully, other
with no real place to go. A leggy blond slid in next to her and
ordered a Pink Dragon and turn to observe the crowds.
“Look at them; the world has gone
mad. Everyone rushing here or there.” She spoke with a hint of a
German accent and took a nervous drink. The intruder’s approach threw Veronica
for a second, then she thoughtfully nodded.
“Yes, everything is done at a rush
these days. It’s a wonder they grow up properly at all.” She nodded
at a group of young school children being ushered through the busy crowds by
their teacher; ‘probably off on an end of term school trip,’ she thought.
“Where you headed to?” The
blond had turned and was searching her face with her deep blue eyes. Quickly
thinking she said;
“I just saw off my children on their
school skiing holiday.” The blond held her gaze and nodded slowly.
“Can I ask you a
question?” The young blond leant forward and placed a hand gently on
her thigh. It made Veronica jump but she controlled her reactions
quickly.
“What eye shadow do you use?”
“Sorry.” She felt the fear drain
within her and smiled. “Oh, yes…. It’s Blue Horizon.” She paused to
see if the blond knew the brand. “By Max Factor. It’s
nothing special really. You can get in Boots.” The blond smiled, finished her
drink and without another word stood, adjusted her short skirt and
left. When she turned back to the bar she made eye contact with the
barman. He could see the confused look on her face and came over.
“It’s alright Miss. She’s from the
vice squad, just checking the area out. Jimmy the
DCI.” He nodded over her shoulder to where the man in the black
leather three quarter length coat stood. “Is doing his rounds.” She
quickly glanced over her shoulder to see the leggy blond quickly say something
to the man then walk away. Their eyes met for a brief second, then
he seem to lose interest in her and turn away. She raised her eyebrows and smiled. ‘A
prostitute,’ she thought; finished her drink, then got up and made her way back
out into the main concourse.
The ride home was uneventful and when
she reached Chelmsford ,
she had made her mind up. She was going to do it, and got off the
bus. ‘Somerset
is nice this time of the year,’ she thought and with that, started to walk
towards the railway station and a new life.
That evening a Mrs Mildred Frampton
from Rayleigh had called the police to complain that her husband had not come
home from work. It was noted that none of his clothes were missing
and once the preliminaries had taken place the police started to ask around the
local area only to discover that Mrs Frampton was an obnoxious, antagonising
bully of a woman who degraded her quiet husband at every opportunity. ‘No
wonder he left her.’ seemed to be the standard reply to those being
interviewed.
Later the same evening a pretty
looking woman booked into the Chesterfield Arms in Taunton . As she stood in front of
the mirror in her room, she smiled at herself; dropped her red hand bag, kicked
off her high heel shoes and pulled off her wig and rubbed the short light blond
hair. She held her gaze for a minute then spoke quietly.
“Well Veronica, say good bye to David
Frampton.”
Copyright Bob French
Great story, enjoyed it. Guessed that the main character was a transvestite of some sort but you gave it an extra twist at the end.
ReplyDeleteI read it, aware that she was a man in woman's clothing testing the atmosphere, but didn't expect the twist at the end. Well written, enjoyed it!
ReplyDelete(scooped up the discarded make-up containers) was uncharacteristic. They were not discarded, or they would have been binned me thinks?