THE SOLE SURVIVOR
By Janet
Baldey
The weather girl turned back to face the camera, her
dimples deepening. Keiron stared
mesmerised as the swirl of her hair followed the toss of her head. He was in love. She had to be the most beautiful girl on the
planet.
“So, it’s
good news for all you stargazers. It’s going to be a clear night. Ideal for
comet watching.”
Keiron
glanced towards his father and his faced burned as his father winked, quickly,
he smothered all thoughts of the girl.
“Dad, can I
watch? Please.”
His father
raised his eyebrows. “Don’t know lad. There’s school tomorrow. What would Mum
say?”
“She’d let
me. There won’t be another comet passing so close in the whole of my life. All
my mates will be watching.”
He was
stretching the truth a bit here, well aware of what his mother would really
say.
“Certainly
not, Keiron. How can you concentrate on
your lessons if you’re only half awake?”
In a way, he
was glad Mum wasn’t around. His father
was always much easier to handle. Sure enough, Dad was settling himself in his
armchair with a little grunt of comfort.
“OK. Just
this once, but if there’s a problem with you in the morning…..” He looked at
Keiron over the top of his glasses and Kieron shook his head until his neck
hurt.
“No trouble,
I promise. Are you going to watch it with me?”
“Wouldn’t
miss it, son. Don’t have to get up for work in the morning.”
His father
had taken a couple of weeks off while Keiron’s mum was away caring for his
Gran. This was despite Keiron, and his sister Becky, vowing it wasn’t
necessary. But, in a way, Kieron had been glad when his parents had over-ruled
them. If anything went wrong, he would get the blame and Becky could be
difficult. “A right little madam,” his mother sometimes called her.
Later that
evening, cameras panned over the night sky while the professor fronting the programme pointed out each glittering constellation, his face alight with
enthusiasm.
Keiron was
entranced, wondering if it was cissy to find it beautiful, like stretched black
velvet sprinkled with diamonds. Then, he
erupted, his voice cracking with excitement.
“I see it
Dad. Look.…”
A faint luminous smudge had appeared on the outer reaches
of the screen and as they watched, it gradually grew brighter, increasing in
size until they could clearly see its tail of phosphorescence.
The
astrophysicist’s voice hushed to a reverent whisper.
“This comet
probably originated in the Oort cloud and has been travelling for thousands of
light-years to get here. It’s the size of a largish building and could do a lot
of damage if it collided with earth.” He
chuckled, “but don’t worry, we’ve been tracking it for years and it will miss
us by a country mile.”
Keiron
remembered feeling faintly disappointed. It would be well cool if he was wrong.
Something to talk about at school, anyway.
At last, the comet dwindled and disappeared.
Keiron’s dad got up and stretched.
“Well, that’s that. Switch off the box, there’s a good lad. I’m off to bed.”
It had been
one mad rush to get out of the house the following morning. For some reason,
their alarm clocks had failed, and they’d overslept. His Dad plugged in the electric kettle but it
refused to work. He frowned and tried
the lights.
“Probably a
fuse. I’ll sort it out when I get back.
Come on….”
Outside, it
was dark and oppressive, the cloud seeming to press down on them like an
assassin’s blanket. All the neighbouring houses were in darkness, their shapes
insubstantial in the gloom. “Must be a power cut”, his father said.
As they
neared the school, groups of youths were trudging up the road. None looked happy
and several were fiddling with their phones. Keiron fished for his in his
pocket, but it was quite dead.
The power
cut wasn’t just local because the school was affected as well. The teachers
made an effort to carry on, but they were just as bewildered as the kids. Phones were out, power had failed, and no
newspapers had arrived in the shops. Rumours began as a trickle and increased
to a flood, bobbing with a mess of guesswork. A nuclear device had exploded,
hackers had destroyed the internet, and maybe, just maybe, the professor had
got it wrong and the comet had collided with Earth. When Keiron heard this, he was plagued with
guilt, after all, he’d more or less wished for it.
That evening
it started to rain. By morning, it was a deluge. A seemingly solid sheet of
water fell from the heavens and swirled down the streets while the drains
vomited up ugly yellow bubbles. Keiron’s dad made a valiant effort to drive
them to school but rain had got into the
engine and it wouldn’t start. He came back in soaked to the skin and streaked
with dirt.
“Bloody
rain’s filthy,” he growled and went upstairs to wash in cold water.
For the next
two weeks it showed no sign of stopping, there was still no heating and no
news, only conjecture. Keiron spent the
days reading and staring out of rain-washed windows. His father had started to
prowl around the house. There’d been no word from Mum and his Gran’s house was
near a river. His father was torn but, at last, he made up his mind.
“I’m going
to fetch them. It’s best if we’re all under one roof.”
Just before
he left, he leaned out of the car window. “Don’t leave the house. People are
starting to panic and there might be gangs roaming around.”
Keiron put
his arm around his shivering sister and watched their father drive away,
neither of them realising they would never see him again.
Time
crawled. Both were continuously on edge,
waiting for the sound of their car. After many false alarms leading to bitter
disappointment, they developed thick shells of stoicism.
There was a good stock of food in
the freezer but it was quickly defrosting and there was no means of heating
it. Both got heartily sick of cold baked
beans and once, Keiron disobeyed his father and struggled to the corner shop,
only to find it closed, its shelves empty.
Soon, the
rain turned to snow. The flakes flying faster and faster until they merged into
a solid wall, deadening all sight and sound of life. The temperature plummeted
and the house felt like a ‘fridge. Both
piled on layers of clothing but even so, they shivered continuously. At night
they crawled under a mound of blankets and lay quaking in each other’s arms.
Each day grew colder than the last until it was torture getting out of bed. By
then, their food was gone so they didn’t bother. Becky cried a lot so Keiron
tried to cheer her up by telling stories but most of the time they slept,
drifting in and out of their separate dreams.
Once Keiron
woke to find the room flooded with light and almost fell out of bed thinking it
was sunshine. He crawled to the window only to be confronted by a gleaming
sheet of ice. During the night, a blizzard must have swept over the house,
walling them in. Numbed, he stumbled
back to bed only to find that at some unmeasured moment, Becky had left the
world. He lay down and cradled the
cooling body of his sister, waiting to join her.
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The old man
put down his pencil and drew his coat closer. A born writer, he’d never known
Keiron and Becky. But although they were
purely figments of his imagination, he was sure they’d existed somewhere in the
world. Billions had perished, and a couple of youngsters left alone, would have
stood no chance.
Sealed in their house, the
youngsters would never have known the truth. Earth had suffered a massive
hammer blow from a rogue asteroid lurking in the shadow of the comet, unnoticed
by the scientists. Nearing earth it had veered away on its own unstable
trajectory and smashed into Northern China
sending a huge column of dust and interstellar waste into the atmosphere where
it lay like a dirty shroud, blocking every vestige of heat from the sun. And that was all it took.
The man supposed he’d been lucky if lucky was the word. His father, who people had called as survivalist freak,
had built a house with a huge basement capable of withstanding any nuclear
attack, fully equipped with enough oil, water and food to last a decade. Somehow, they’d managed to subsist. But his parents were now dead. He was on his own and food was running out.
Pulling on all the clothes he
possessed, he went outside. Blinking continuously to stop frost forming on his
eyelashes, he scanned the bleak wasteland stretching to the far-away hills and wondered if he
really was the sole survivor.
CopyrightJanet Baldey
This is a pyramid. The story starts at it's apex, light-hearted and warm. Then progresses to a more ominous stage. You think the survivor will be the boy or his sister, only at the end is the survivor revealed. I particularly like the slow progression, and I feel the growing sense of doom; then I realise it's only a story! Nice one, the viewers will love it. Poor China, it's really getting a hammering in this blog. Thank you for sharing it!
ReplyDeleteSomehow, it seems that reading is more vivid than hearing it read.
I absolutely agree. Unless they are performance pieces, stories are meant to be read on the page. And, of course, it depends on the skill of the reader - we are authors, not actors!
ReplyDeleteJanet?Excellent, now that's my type of story. Abrupt and unexpected ending.The final paragraph a first in another story, a paradox.Got any more like that up your sleeve Janet?
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