GAME GONE
WRONG
By Richard Banks
It
should have been the best booze-up ever and on the Friday before the wedding we
were determined to give John a send-off that, alcohol permitting, he would
remember for the rest of his life.
There were four of us, the Fab Four we
called ourselves. Before that it had been the Three Musketeers, then Paul
joined us at Salfleet Comprehensive, halfway through the second year. As no one knew
much about the Musketeers our transition to the Fab Four was definitely an
improvement, especially as we already had a John, and Joey’s second name was
George. All we needed was a Ringo but short of me changing my name by deed poll
there was no way that was going to happen; nevertheless, I did the next best
thing and acquired a signet ring from Ratner's that cost me most of the cash I
earned from my Saturday job at Woolworths.
As mates went, we were the best, the
closest, and nothing and no one was going to come between us. Did we believe
that after the break-up of the
Beatles? Probably not. By then we had left school and were a year or two into
our first jobs. We were still pretty naive but the reality was beginning to take
root; if Yoko Ono could tear apart the greatest rock band in history it was
only a matter of time before some other Yoko did the same to us.
Cynthia Parker was the first to try. To
give her her due she was a better-looking bird than Yoko but when she suggested
to Joey that they go to the cinema one Saturday instead of to the football he
at last, came to his senses and brought a season ticket. After Cynthia there was
Debby whose attraction disappeared the day she covered her long legs with a
maxi skirt and Paul’s attention shifted to a face he didn’t much like. Then
there was Rose who smelled of Woodbines and Bridget whose mad brother
threatened to duff up John for some indiscretion committed in the back row of
the Rialto . By
the time temptation came to me I was well warned and when Sonya made me buy her
a vodka and Pernod in the august surroundings of the country club I cut my
losses and abandoned her mid-date for the public bar of the Nags Head.
Having repelled the initial onslaught
we closed ranks and dedicated our lives to football and the excessive
consumption of alcohol. While we did not explicitly exclude women from our
midst only those who passed the six-pint test and supported the Rovers had any
chance with us. But of course, there is always someone who won’t abide by the
rules and on a fateful day in April when the Rovers were relegated to Division
Four, our very own Yoko arrived in the person of Tamsin.
Having set her sights on John – who
else – she took advantage of his despair by convincing him that a better life
was to be had in the town’s shopping mall and the Arts Club coffee bar. When he
was seen in the High Street wearing a cravat we knew he was lost forever and
that nothing short of an exorcism was going to bring him back to us. Three
months later he was engaged and six after that an envelope dropped through my
letterbox containing an invitation to the wedding. In truth I was surprised to
be sent one but when I met up with Joey and Paul and found that they also had
been invited we resolved, as previously stated, to give John a stag night
second to none.
Tamsin was bound to try and stop us but
when we put it to John he needed little persuading. Indeed in his confused,
besotted state of mind, the stag night took on a significance almost equal to
that of the wedding, a rite of passage comparable to the condemned prisoner’s
last meal. Quite what he said about this to Tamsin I don’t know. What she said
to him was audible to everyone within a half-mile radius and John was dismissed
from her presence with an ultimatum that it was either her or us. As John wasn’t
planning on marrying any of us he couldn’t quite see what the problem was but
on surmising that it might have something to do with Tamsin’s aversion to pubs,
beer and drunkenness he reopened negotiations by promising to drink no more
than six pints and to be in his bed by half-past eleven. When Tamsin added the
proviso that her brother Crispin come along, a deal was struck that gave the go-ahead for both stag do and wedding.
So, we make a plan and on the night
itself the four of us, plus Crispin, meet up at the Nags and commence
operations with a pint of bitter and a whisky chaser. Crispin pulls out a
notebook and when we ask him what he’s up to he says that he’s counting John’s
drinks which he says are two and that he’s only allowed another four. This we
tell him is not so because John’s agreement with Tamsin only refers to pints so
therefore spirits don’t count. This he says isn’t fair but next round we lace
the half-pint he’s drinking with a double Grappa and his conception of fair is
lost in a confusion of brain that defeats his ability to stay upright. We leave
him face down on the sawdust floor of the Nags and move on to the George when
the stripper-gram we ordered arrives in the character of Little Bo Beep who
having previously lost her sheep compounds her misfortune by losing her crook
and everything she is wearing. The landlady’s none too amused and tells us to
leave, which we were going to do anyway, so we pile into Paul’s car and drive
out to the Wheatsheaf which is in the country and keeps open to three or four
in the morning. When we tell John this he reminds us, somewhat pathetically,
that he’s supposed to be home by 11.30 and we assure him that by 11.30 the next
morning he will be.
At 4am we stagger out and John thanks
us for the best night out he’s ever had, but it’s not over yet and halfway
back to town we stop the car, strip him down to his boxers and leave him to
walk the four miles back to town. However, we’re only kidding so half a mile on
we pull over to the side of the road and wait for him to catch up. When he
doesn’t, we drive back. We find him lying face down, battered lifeless by the
car that hit him.
It isn’t our fault we tell ourselves
but Tamsin doesn’t see it that way. To her, we are as guilty as the hit and run
driver that scythed him down. Other people think the same, and deep down so do
we. Paul takes it worse than any of us and a month later his body is found at
the bottom of a cliff only a hundred yards from where John died. It was no
accident, but the Coroner takes pity on John’s mother and returns the open
verdict that triggers payment of the assurance policy she took out on him when
he first started school.
The stupid, sunshine days of our youth
had turned tonight. We were cursed. When Joey stumbled off a crowded platform
in front of an incoming train it was clear that I would be the next to die. It’s
fate. There’s nothing to be done but seek the absolution that only one person
can provide.
And so it was that I went unannounced
to Tamsin’s flat to say sorry and throw myself on her mercy. I feared she would
slam the door in my face but she allows me in and lets me rattle on with my
wild talk of fate and punishment. And as I talk her face reveals the emotion
welling up inside. There is, she snaps, no such thing as fate, only the helping
hands of those who see what must be done and make it happen. Her hands, not fate
had pushed Paul and Joey to their deaths; her hands had sent them to a place
she hoped was hell.
She gets up from the settee where she
had been sitting and walks resolutely to the kitchen. I should be running but
by the time she returns I am no more than on my feet and turning for the door.
I didn’t see the knife that sliced me, that sent me crashing to my knees but as
I reach out for the handle the door opens as if my thoughts had made it happen.
A woman screams, a man roars and a blow is struck that sends Tamsin thudding to
the floor. I am safe; saved by the arrival of Tamsin’s flatmate and her
boyfriend.
But life can never be the same. My body
heals, but fear still rules, and so does guilt. Familiar sights and faces only
make it worse. I cut and run to a job and lodgings far from home and the asylum
where Tamsin still plots my death. Her life, like mine, is a game gone wrong,
no length of time will make it right.
Copyright Richard Banks
Hi Ricardo, It's better visually than it was aurally, but it is a good story either way. Thanks for posting it.
ReplyDeleteThanks for comments. Apologies for boring voice. One of the blog's great strengths is the opportunity it gives members to have their stories read as well as heard. It's good to have feedback on stories and this seems to happen more frequently on the blog.
DeleteHi Richard, loved the story great humour and I wasn't disappointed in my expectation that one or more characters would be meeting an untimely demise. I probably shouldn't be, but I am still laughing.
ReplyDeleteMade my day.
Glad you enjoyed it. It was an unusual mix of comedy and horror. Something I hadn't tried before.
DeleteI was trying to think of a film this story of yours reminded me of, a group of 5? Entering a pact, one by one dying after a similar accident. I remember turning it off having got bored. Yours had me gripped to the end. I actually thought I was reading a page from your diary. I hope not.
ReplyDeleteGreat read Richard.
Thanks for your comments. Don't recall film you mention. Often get ideas from TV but try not to pinch story lines. Simon Pegg was in a film a few years ago which involved a pub crawl in a town that had been taken over by zombies. Very funny but unlike my story it all ended well.
DeleteThis is a great story. Humour, tragedy and pathos cleverly intertwined. Professional and polished, it deserves to be published.
ReplyDeleteThanks. Gave up on publication years ago. Unfortunately there are few magazines that take male fiction (a few more for women) and few, if any, book publishers printing short fiction by unknown authors. If one wants to be discovered the best route may well be through our books and the blog. Any ideas to the contrary gratefully received
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