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Wednesday, 8 April 2020

" Polishing the silver" A Haibun


Polishing the Silver 

By Robert Kingston

The portal was modern, four sets of glass propped against the right-hand wall of an old building.

foot traffic 
beneath the ground
a war continues

We had been warned of loud bangs and flashes, and that those squeamish should shield their eyes, as blood mixed with grime and disease-riddled flesh could persuade one to forego lunch

at home
with the bugs
tree roots protrude

Moving along, musk’s of 99 years sidled their way drenching all in their path. Each side, windows through sandbags revealed the flashes between night and day, snow and rain, sun and fog, eyes burdened with terror, fire, pain, barbed posts with razor wire holding scantily clad men and horses 

stable block
a lackey mucks out
his mind

The timber supports holding the tunnel roof and walls were reconstructed to smell with years of decomposition, its surface of deep grain damp, the moisture running down onto concrete

cannon fire
a ring of deafness
resonates
grown men blown
into madness

Nearing the tunnel end, the light growing brighter, we view the last window of widows’ and spinsters’ love letters, telegrams, small memorabilia, belts, razors etc.in various rotted stages. 

An eyeglass catches my eye

fallen apples
each highly polished
in a flag

Outside we are graced with a stream of running water, a manicured tree-lined space leading us back into a rebirthed metropolitan market street.

Brandy -
we choose a toast
over tomato soup



Robert Kingston

This Haibun was first published in “Blithe Spirit” British Haiku Society 2017 Volume 28, number 1.


4 comments:

  1. Very clever, very descriptive, very nice.

    I doubt I could write it but I could definitely read it & read it &...
    Better read than heart with spoken word. Nice one Rob.

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  2. I echo Len's comments. Not sure that I fully understand it (too thick) but it is fascinating to read.

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    1. Hi Janet.
      This was written after a visit to a ww1 war museum in Amiens France. The haiku and tanka within are used for extra effect. I am happy to talk about haiku if it is something that intrigues or interests you.
      All the best Rob

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  3. Very descriptive and deeply moving, in my imagination I was there in the museum and having flashbacks to an earlier time of war and madness. Particularly liked ‘stable block, a lackey mucks out his mind’ and ‘a ring of deafness resonates, grown men blown into madness’ - brilliant Rob, thanks for sharing

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