Polishing the Silver
By Robert Kingston
The portal was modern, four sets of glass propped
against the right-hand wall of an old building.
foot traffic
beneath the ground
a war continues
We had been warned of loud bangs and flashes, and
that those squeamish should shield their eyes, as blood mixed with grime and
disease-riddled flesh could persuade one to forego lunch
at home
with the bugs
tree roots protrude
Moving along, musk’s of 99 years sidled their way
drenching all in their path. Each side, windows through sandbags revealed the
flashes between night and day, snow and rain, sun and fog, eyes burdened with
terror, fire, pain, barbed posts with razor wire holding scantily clad men and
horses
stable block
a lackey mucks out
his mind
The timber supports holding the tunnel roof and
walls were reconstructed to smell with years of decomposition, its surface of
deep grain damp, the moisture running down onto concrete
cannon fire
a ring of deafness
resonates
grown men blown
into madness
Nearing the tunnel end, the light growing brighter,
we view the last window of widows’ and spinsters’ love letters, telegrams,
small memorabilia, belts, razors etc.in various rotted stages.
An eyeglass catches my eye
fallen apples
each highly polished
in a flag
Outside we are graced with a stream of running
water, a manicured tree-lined space leading us back into a rebirthed
metropolitan market street.
Brandy -
we choose a toast
over tomato soup
Robert Kingston
This Haibun was first published in “Blithe Spirit” British Haiku
Society 2017 Volume 28, number 1.
Very clever, very descriptive, very nice.
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Better read than heart with spoken word. Nice one Rob.
I echo Len's comments. Not sure that I fully understand it (too thick) but it is fascinating to read.
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DeleteThis was written after a visit to a ww1 war museum in Amiens France. The haiku and tanka within are used for extra effect. I am happy to talk about haiku if it is something that intrigues or interests you.
All the best Rob
Very descriptive and deeply moving, in my imagination I was there in the museum and having flashbacks to an earlier time of war and madness. Particularly liked ‘stable block, a lackey mucks out his mind’ and ‘a ring of deafness resonates, grown men blown into madness’ - brilliant Rob, thanks for sharing
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