Lazing On A Sunny Afternoon
By Jane Scoggins
Early
July, and Lorna was sitting in an old deckchair pulled out from the shed in her
back garden. So old was it, that she had got a splinter in her thumb from
the wood and had to find the packet of plasters. What a treat after thirty
years living in city flats with no outside space, to move to a semi-detached
cottage surrounded by countryside. She had not relished the thought of
retirement initially but after increasingly competitive targets in the world of
finance, she was beginning to feel the benefits of entering into a new world.
The delights of slumping into a deckchair with no one to see that she was in an
old faded sundress, bare legs and not a scrap of makeup on could not be
described, just enjoyed. The years of expensive suits, heels and discreet
matching accessories could now be a thing of the past. As would the strict
diet, and tasteless seagrass smoothies. It had been hard work with no respite,
in the world of high finance with increasingly unachievable targets. The glass
ceiling had cracked a bit but had not yet been smashed for women in her
profession. Looking around the neglected garden she wondered about getting a
gardener or having a go herself at pruning the overgrown shrubs and mowing the
lawn. Closing her eyes for a minute to defer having to make a decision she
listened to a songbird and almost dozed off. The sound of a quiet female voice
the other side of the overgrown hedge brought her back to the present.
''It's OK, I will phone and get someone to come
and get us, don't worry''
Lorna opened her eyes and listened again.
''Don't worry, it will be alright. Shush
whilst I phone''
A couple of seconds silence followed and
then
'' I have a flat tyre. Yes, we are fine. I
have pulled into a field off the road. No, no one has seen me, there is no one
about, just a cottage. Yes, use my phone tracker to find me''
Lorna got up and moved towards the high
hedge where somewhere amongst all that thick greenery would be a gate of some
sort for access to the field and bridleway. It was not easy to open as the catch was stuck hard but when she did, she peered out to see who it was that
had phoned for help.
The young woman and small child must have
heard her struggling to open the gate so were prepared to see a face appear but
both looked anxious. The little girl held on to the woman's leg and hid behind
her.
''Sorry to startle you. I was sitting in
the garden and heard you on the phone about your flat tyre''
The woman answered politely.
'' Help is on its way thank you''
The child peeped out from behind the
woman's legs and then started to move her arms and hands rapidly about her head
as an insect buzzed around her saying 'Ouch'' when at the same time a prickle
from the field pierced through her sock into her foot.
'' Why not come into my garden and wait?
There are are no buzzy insects or prickles there''
Rather reluctantly the woman looked at
the child who had started to move forward. She turned to the woman
''Can we please?''
Again rather reluctantly, but keen to
appease the child the woman replied
''That is kind, thank you''
Inside the gate, the child surveyed the
small unruly garden and then flopped down on the grass, and took off her sandals
and socks. A prickle had pierced the skin and a drop of blood oozed.
Lorna
reached in her dress pocket and produced a plaster and held it out to the
child.
'' Can I put it on by myself?'' she
pleaded
The woman smiled and nodded her agreement.
The plaster was put on more or less in the right place and with much
concentration, before the little girl slipped her feet back into her sandals
and secured the Velcro fastenings before exclaiming.
'' We have a treehouse and a swing in our
big garden, but you have lots of daisies, I know how to make a chain''
With a bit of help from the two adults, the child made a chain and then put it on her head as a crown and danced about
the unmown lawn singing London Bridge Is Falling Down, whilst the woman
clapped softly and smiled. At the sound of voices, the neighbours' cat made an
appearance in the garden. The child was delighted and sank to her knees to
stroke her.
''That's Mrs Miggins'' said Lorna by way of
introduction.
Mrs Miggins arched her back and stretched her
neck so that the child could stroke her under the chin as she purred.
''I like cats better than dogs, apart from
Lupo'' she mused.
'' Granny has dogs, but they are not
always friendly and Candy barks a lot, and they sometimes growl, and that's not
nice is it? Granny says that they are grumpy because they are old, and they
can't help that'' she returned her attention to pampering Mrs Miggins and all
was quiet. The woman in white jeans and
crisp shirt had an elegance about her even when she crouched down to stroke and
tickle the cat that made Lorna aware of her own scruffy appearance.
''Mummy could I have a cat for my next
birthday?''
''We'll see Lottie. Perhaps''
A car was heard drawing up nearby and a man's
head appeared at the gate. The woman called to the child, then shook Lorna's
hand saying
''Thank you so much for entertaining us
while we waited, it was so kind of you to invite us into your garden'' and with
that they were gone, the child still wearing the daisy crown on her head and
giving Lorna a wave and a smile.
Lorna went inside the cottage to make a
cup of tea. In the hallway, she caught sight of her dishevelled hair and bra
strap on display hanging down her arm smiled to herself mouthing 'country
bumpkin!'
Going back outside she found the child’s
socks screwed up where she had left them under the deckchair.
Lorna kept the socks in the kitchen for a
few days and then took them upstairs and put them on her childhood teddy as a
keepsake. They were almost new, pretty with a lacy top.
It was not for a few weeks that Lorna gave
another thought to the woman and child. She was shopping in Kings Lynn and saw
a photograph in the window of the bookshop that triggered memories of that afternoon
in the garden. The picture was of Anmer Hall, a house a few miles away used by
Prince William and his family when in Norfolk .
Lorna stood looking at the picture, and the
one beside it of William, Catherine, and their two children.
''Oh my goodness, Lorna whispered to
herself. I have come to live in Norfolk
not far from where they spend their
holidays. And I think I invited the future Queen into my back garden in my
raggy old sundress, my hair in a mess and with my bra straps showing. I gave a plaster
and made a daisy crown for a princess, and my old teddy is wearing her royal
socks. No, really? Or am I imagining it? No, I don’t think I am. Why did I not
think those faces were familiar, and come to think of it I am sure I heard her
call the child Lottie when they left. And the dog's names, I will google them
when I get home. I must tell Ted bear when I get back, he could be almost as
important as Paddington.
© Copywrite Jane Scoggins
Delightful story Jane. I think I might have used a few full stops in the dialogue, but that didn't in any way detract from your plausible story. I kind of like to think it actually happened except, you don't live in Norfolk. Do you?
ReplyDeleteHa ha. No but I was nanny to the children of an aristoctat who was a lady in waiting at the Queen's coronation, so I felt a bit of a
ReplyDeleteRoyal insdider all those years ago.
Nice story Jane and well told. Perhaps you might consider giving a physical description of the young woman earlier on in the story ie, when you first meet. This would give a sense of foreshadowing so that the reader thinks 'of course!' at the end and feel clever.
ReplyDeleteBW Janet
I gave a taste of her clothing as anobservation and tiny clue,but didnt want to give any more away as wanted the reader to come to the realisation of who they were at the same time as the writer.Like the writer,some of us wouldn't recognise a famous person in an unexpected situation out of context,even if a face seemed somehow familiar.
Deletesorry this comment may seem late just noticed my comments have been going nowhere.hopefully it's been sorted.Loved the story and can feel the calmness that a garden brings.I know you love your garden as do I mine.Well written, well done.
ReplyDeleteLoved the story Jane, Well written:)
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