Two Limericks:
Designer Wear.
By Sis Unsworth
“Can
I go to the shops?” John did ask,
he
did have a new special task.
To
the town he would go,
So
that he could show
off,
his brand new designer face mask!
First Steps…
By Sis Unsworth
I came out of Lockdown today,
I survived it I’m happy to say,
but I had to complain,
when it started to rain,
so now back indoors I will stay
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Sis Unsworth
I love Limericks, enjambment too, I am impressed.
ReplyDeleteI see you have a "near rhyme" on the 3rd line 2nd limerick.
You could change that line to "but I had to complain" this will give the exact rhyme to match. Nice to hear from you again.
Let's try it. See what Sis says?
DeleteYou always find humour in every situation, and it does our hearts good! Batter than a tonic. Well written Sis...
ReplyDeleteYes, 2 lovely limericks...I'm a fan of those too. I have a handful of those somewhere.
ReplyDeleteShelley
lookem out Shell, we need more of them to cheer us up!
Deletegood..freedom writers cast names
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