Garden Magic #1
By Dawn Van Win
Seeds resting
in
A furrow deep
Awaken from
Resplendent
sleep
Soft rain
falls gently
From above
And beckons
life
To grow
In love
Copyright Dawn Van Win
Simple sentiments, well presented, thank you for sharing. Your watercolour is also representative of summer...
ReplyDeleteI enjoyed your short poem, lovely picture, both compliment each other.
ReplyDeleteI am intrigued Dawn.Are both painting and poem titled "Garden Magic?" Whilst the poem, in nice neat verse, is immediately understood, the painting begs individual interpretation. My thoughts,and they are simply mine, are that the poem with 3 stanzas instead of four, but retaining the seeds journey,would
ReplyDeletegive "ME" a title of "Three Steps to Heaven." Just my thoughts Dawn but I loved it anyway.