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Friday 17 July 2020

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By Dawn Van Win

Butterfly wings
Beat inside
A bell jar 

Longing for release
This muse

Listen,
Be ready

She will be off
Before you know it 

Copyright Dawn Van Win


3 comments:

  1. Sounds like a Haiku style. But, it's certainly effective. A flutterbye...

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  2. I'm trying to read more into it than maybe there is. Is it a Haiku? It's interesting because it makes you think. A nice visual poem.
    Shelley.

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  3. Much more than this little poem suggests. A metaphor I would guess
    with "the bell jar" being most significant.
    Not a Haiku though.

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