Pay Heed
By Dawn Van Win
Butterfly
wings
Beat inside
A bell
jar
Longing for
release
This muse
Listen,
Be ready
She will be
off
Before you
know it
Copyright Dawn Van Win
We are a diverse group from all walks of life. Our passion is to write; to the best of our ability and sometimes beyond. We meet on the 2nd and 4th Thursday each month, to read and critique our work in friendly, open discussion. However, the Group is not solely about entertaining ourselves. We support THE ESSEX AND HERTS AIR AMBULANCE by producing and selling anthologies of our work. So far we have raised in excess of £9,700, by selling our books at venues throughout Essex.
Sounds like a Haiku style. But, it's certainly effective. A flutterbye...
ReplyDeleteI'm trying to read more into it than maybe there is. Is it a Haiku? It's interesting because it makes you think. A nice visual poem.
ReplyDeleteShelley.
Much more than this little poem suggests. A metaphor I would guess
ReplyDeletewith "the bell jar" being most significant.
Not a Haiku though.