The Host
By Phillip Miller
The day started with a simple enough sign. One hand sliding back and forth a few times,
directly in front of the patient’s eyes, then a click of the fingers and a clap
of the hands; still no response; same routine he’d carried out for the last two
years. He paused to observe himself momentarily in a mirrored closet. The years
had not been kind; neither had he. The days of playing with her were over now;
cameras everywhere.
Chetin had observed the same routine every
morning. It baffled him: no accident, no OD, no trauma, no disease and no
identification. She fascinated him. Her
dark hazel eyes had remained open since the day she was discovered. Her body had been athletic and tanned, but
was now pale and weak; growing weaker by the day, it seemed. He finished his
scheduled care programme and opened the blinds and window. The sun’s rays
filtered through; light and dark ribbed across the patient’s bed. Something
glistening caught the male nurse’s eye on the floor, just below the head
support actuator. Chetin got down on his knees to investigate. Obesity was playing havoc with his knees and
the inguinal hernia was proving more painful by the day. After picking the item up he placed one hand
on the bed, to help himself up, and froze as he felt the warmth of human
contact. Stilling his breath heightened his senses. Fear gripped him, he could
not lookup. “What the hell!” he said, as the object in his palm pulsated and
burnt into his flesh, his screams trapped within his mind, his voice locked in
as the silver object expanded into a chrome veined Icosahedron shaped vessel.
In an instant, he was gone.
Alicia Wright flinched, the colour back in her
cheeks for a fleeting moment, before her eyes slowly rolled back.
The track looked very inviting from where he sat,
oblivious to the crowd that had slowly formed behind him. A cool breeze blew as
a familiar tune came into his head, and
so he started to hum along to it. Then, in the distance, he saw the pin-prick
main light of the 7pm to Nottingham, and so steadied himself on the cold, damp
capping stone, ready for the big push.
He felt the pressure again, heavier this time, bearing down on him. His
hands were shaking but the nicotine was calling and so rolled one last
cigarette.
The click-clack of the oncoming train had an
ominous rhythm to it and the timing was perfect. The crowd grew steadily
larger. Some asked him to “come down!” or, “don’t do it!” A man holding a
Rottweiler said, “Not yet mate!” as he reached for his phone and took a
selfie. An elderly woman raised her hand
to touch him but then thought better of it.
The unshaven, unkempt vagrant turned his head
slightly; the crowd stepping back in unison with the odd gasp here and there.
Jay Beeson had a date with destiny. He had tried
hard; not hard enough it would seem. He knew the train would fly past this
stop. If he timed it right then he would hit the ground just as it reached the
bridge.
“Jump then, you arsehole,” said a gruff voice
over and above the rest. “I’ve been here for nearly twenty minutes and my salad’s
getting cold.” Most people cussed him into silence, but a few couldn’t help but
laugh.” Jay shuffled forward slightly. It ends today.
“Go on then, fuckin’jump!” came the gruff voice
again. The speeding commuter train was visible now. Jay felt happy. For the
first time in years, he felt at peace. “It’s finally over,” he whispered. There
was a quietening in his mind. Thirty seconds; twenty seconds; ten seconds.
Jay pushed off with both hands as the crowd
screamed in horror.
It seemed, however, that someone else had the
same idea. Just as he was about to crash to his death, a figure leapt from the
almost empty platform and smashed into his side, breaking Jay’s fall and
knocking him sideways onto the stretch of ballast that lined the bank. The unwitting tormenter was obliterated. His
body smashed and ripped to pieces beneath the two hundred tonne flyer.
It was over in a flash and the sorry subject that
was Jay Beeson picked himself up, brushed himself down and looked up at the
stars.
“Please,” he raised his arms to the night sky and
screamed, “let me go.”
Sirens could be heard in the distance: the image
of Grandbrooke House fixed in his mind.
Never going back there. I’d rather be dead. I
can’t be dead. she owns me. He walked along the train
tracks for a few miles before reaching his makeshift home; a large disused,
galvanised water tank that sat on the dilapidated ruin that was Fribett’s
Cradle.
After climbing up the old wooden ladder and
lifting the cutout lid he fell inside. His stomach grumbled as he took a slice
of mildewed bread and leftover tuna from a torn haversack, chewed slowly, and
then wept.
Copyright Phillip Miller
Wonderful. Intriguing storyline, excellent writing and fantastic imagery. I think this is very good indeed. Can't wait for the next episode.
ReplyDeleteJust one thing: in the 2nd paragraph wasn't sure what baffled
Chetin. Or should it be ...she baffled him?
Well Phil, I loved this story as much for what was not written as to what was.I maybe completely barking mad but assumed this story was complete and had left the reader to fill in the blanks. I felt there were enough clues within to assist the readers search for a reasoning. Of course we could all come up with something different
ReplyDeletewhich makes it all the more intriguing. Should there be more episodes I shall compare them to my notes.Whatever the result this was,very well written and possibly, my best read yet.
Great Flash fiction tales leave a lot to the imagination (like Haiku). This is an excellent example, enjoyed it immensely...
ReplyDeleteYeah! I was gonna extend it but thought it was right to end it.
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