NUESTIA SENORA DE LA MERCEDES
By Phillip
Miller
The Odyssey dived into the
blue in search of hidden treasure
It found a ship sunk years
ago with gold, you could not measure.
Nuestia Senora de la Mercedes,
went down in 1804,
Sunk by the British Navy, causing
Spain to re-enter the war.
Six men leapt from that
burning wreck before it slipped away,
Climbing aboard an old
rowboat, they thought it their lucky day.
Under the cover of darkness,
they drifted out of sight,
Unaware of what lay ahead, on
that fatalistic night
They woke in the morning, the
burning sun upon their faces
So made some lines to catch
some food, from old belts and laces.
They fished at night and
slept through the day, dreaming of freshwater.
Ten days passed, one went
mad, swearing he’d seen his daughter.
He laughed and joked and
started to fit, sadly the poor wretch died
They committed his body to
the sea and the youngest sailor cried.
“We must be strong, Carlos my
lad, or our maker we’ll surely meet”
“We’re going to die anyway Sir, as there’s not
enough to eat.”
“Tell you know, we’ll make a
pact if you can get this round your head.
We’ll drink the blood and eat
the flesh of any man that’s dead.”
“Be damned you, butcher, I’d
rather die, than feast upon a mate.”
But, as the others agreed,
for Carlos it was too late.
As he lay in the sun, with
his face all burnt and chapped
The first in charge put his
hands around his throat, choking him as he napped.
In came a storm, tossing them
high, so under the water, they went.
Only three came up, and one
smiled, as down to the depths he was sent
30 days passed till they
spotted land and with the current riding them in.
They fell on the shore,
looked up to the sky, thanking God for the strength within.
But something was wrong with
this plush little isle, all was not as it seemed.
A dark native, with a spear in
hand, looked down and broadly beamed.
“You are so thin, but I’ll
tell my kin, and we’ll eat you for our tea
We’ll roast you with roots,
and fresh bamboo shoots, you Devils from the sea.”
Trussed up like pigs and
taken away, they were basted with oils and seeds
Covered in clay, except for
their heads, which were wrapped in tasty seaweeds.
The fires burnt long and ever
so slow, so painfully did they cook
Finally, they died, and out
fell their eyes, swiftly gobbled up by a rook.
Their flesh was eaten and
their bones were beaten against an old skin drum,
To ward off sea devils and
please their God, washing them down with old Navy rum.
They say this tale is as old
as the hills
But no trace has ever been
found
Yet on an island across the
seas
There stands a manmade mound
And in a cage upon that earth
Guarded by the village ladies
lies a tattooed drum
inscribed
Nuestia Senora de la
Mercedes.
Copyright Phillip Miller
Sounds like the Rhyme of the ancient mariner; brought up to date! Very well written, dare I ask if it's a true story? Thank you for sharing it...
ReplyDeleteA real old "sea shanty" Phil. Swings along with Rhythmic Rhyme and I like the switch on the last two stanzas.
ReplyDeleteHowever,because you have used rhyming couplets on most of the stanzas, any variation in syllable counts causes a loss of fluidity when reading, especially aloud. There are a couple of stanzas where words can be either, omitted or introduced. A poem well worth "tinkering with". I really enjoyed it.
This is great and I'm sure it's too gory to be anything but true.
ReplyDeleteIts true about the Oddysey and the ship Len. The rest is made up.
ReplyDeleteThanks for the good advice Pete. I don't think I'll change it though as it has to be read a certain way, hey ho!
Many cannibals around in those days Chestersmummy: cannibalism is horrific but was still rife up until around 1867. I have heard stories of it still being g used up until the 1920's ( unconfirmed, of course)