THE PASSING
Whilst
tidying some garden pots
on the morning of my birthday
I
disturbed a male blackbird
but
he didn’t fly away.
He
hopped a mere two feet from me
and
stood upon a boulder,
studying
me he didn’t flinch
he
couldn’t have been much bolder.
I
thought, at first, he must be hurt
my
hand reached out to test,
he
shifted, slightly, showing me
no
damage tail to chest
he
was fully grown, no doubts,
no
frail chick was he,
and
yet he showed the symptoms
of
young’s naivety.
I
then moved on to other pots
and
thought I’d let him be,
an
hour later, as I passed,
I
could clearly see.
He
was still standing on the rock
Sunbathing,
so I thought,
yet
deep inside my mind, it seemed
things
were not as ought.
I
then forgot him for a while
and
supped my birthday drink,
then
curiosity returned
and
I began to think.
I
wondered if he was still there,
I
looked and then dismay,
he
lay prone upon the ground
for
he had passed away.
Of
course, I’ve seen dead birds before
killed
by cars and cats,
piles
of feathers on the lawn
the
work of “dirty rats.”
But
this was somewhat different
never
again would this bird sing
I’d
spent some final hours with him
yet
failed to hold his wing.
It
set me wondering
and made me sigh,
do birds, like elephants,
choose where to die?
Copyright Peter Woodgate
Nice Poem. There's poignancy here, but what could you have done? Even birds die of natural causes/old age.
ReplyDeleteIt set me wondering, made me sigh.
Birds like elephants choose where they die...
Yes Len, that last stanza is awkward and I have amended it!
DeleteIt set me wondering
and made me sigh
do birds, like elephants,
choose where to die?
Sorted Pete!
DeleteSad little present for your birthday. I suppose wild creatures do die natural deaths but more often it's as you say, cats,cars and 'dirty rats.' Sometimes I think blackbirds court death because they tend to swoop low over roads and don't soar over the cars as they should.
ReplyDeleteA lovely but sad poem. Thanks to you he didnt die alone.
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