THE PRICE OF SUCCESS – PART ONE
By Bob French
Julie
pulled open the door of the classroom and froze. There standing in
front of her was Mandy Thriftwood, the school bully. Just behind her
in the shadows of the corridor were her three bodyguards; Phillipa McGregor,
Miriam Smith and Rashi Mohammad.
“You’re
late!” Before Julie could explain, she felt the stinging slap across
her face. “Come on you little turd, hand over your lunch money, I
haven’t got all day.” There was hatred in her voice and Julie knew
that if she hesitated or tried to give an excuse she’d receive a few more slaps
and a couple of kicks from her three goons.
Reluctantly,
Julie slowly put her hand into her blazer pocket and took out the three pound
coins her Mother had given her at breakfast this morning and handed them
over. Mandy snatched the coins from her hand, pushed her aside and
vanished into the darkened corridor. Miriam Smith, a particularly
nasty person barged into her, knocking her against the door frame, then turned
and smiled as though she was waiting for Julie to say something, her yellow
crooked teeth showing in the dim light. Then she too vanished into
the darkened corridor.
Julie
felt as though the whole world was pressing down on her shoulders. She
had mentioned it to Miss Graham, her English teacher, who said that she would
raise the issue with the Head, but she knew she hadn’t. She sat
looking at the small apple she had taken from the kitchen bowl on the way out to
school when suddenly she felt someone climb in onto the bench next to
her. She froze again, thinking it was Thriftwood and her henchwomen.
“Hi Julie, you look down in the dumps
today. Anything I can help with?”
She turned and forced a grin. She liked
Jimmy. They had met up on the first day of their schooling at St Peter's Infant School . That
was ten years ago and they had remained friends ever since.
Julie thought for a moment, then turned to
Jimmy. “I’ve got a problem and it is really bothering
me. But I don’t know how to fix it.” Jimmy looked down at
the tray in front of Julie.
“Have you had lunch yet?”
“No, that’s the problem. Thriftwood and her
three goons demanded my lunch money again. It was that, or get
another good slap across the face. I dread to think what that Smith
girl would do to me given half a chance. I know my Mum can’t afford it, but….” Her voice trailed off into silence.
Jimmy pushed his tray across in front of
her. “Here, it's a Marmite and cheese sandwich. Get stuck
in. You have got to eat something while I think of a cunning plan.”
Julie discretely squeezed his hand, making sure that
she was not seen by her friends on nearby tables and thanked him and began to
tuck into the sandwich. suddenly Jimmy sat bold upright.
“What is it?” Julie stared at him with a
mouth full of sandwich. Jimmy went on. “Pick up your sandwich and
let’s find somewhere quiet.”
They walked out into the warm air of the mid-day and
headed for the wide-open space of the sports field and sat in the middle of it.
“What’s the plan then?”
“First
thing is for me to speak to Jenifer. You know her, she’s in your
maths class. She works in the offices at ECHO,
the huge supermarket just outside town, at weekends. Jimmy had
known this because he had seen her on a Saturday afternoon in her posh uniform
and had also seen, on numerous occasions, the McGregor’s doing their shopping
there. “Then I think I need to spend some time with Frankie and his
brother Louis, see if they can help me.” Julie studied the expression
on Jimmy’s face. He seemed miles away. The voice of Alex
interrupted the silence and both turned to see Alex walking toward
them. Julie noticed that Alex had hitched up her school kilt a
little and smiled as she noticed the fresh coat of lip-stick on her face.
Julia
turned and faced Jimmy who by now had a worried expression on his face, then he
swore under his breath. Jimmy stood and brushed himself down as Alex
came up to him and stood very close to him.
“What you doing all the way out
here then Jimmy?” ignoring the presence of Julia altogether. “I
thought we were going to have lunch together.”
“Sorry Alex, something came up.” Then he
turned to Julia. “What I need you to do, is to carry on as normal
OK, but try and keep out of the way of Mandy Thriftwood and her goons.”
Alex, not wanting to be outdone by Julia, linked her
arm through Jimmy’s and steered him back to the school building.
On the stroll back across the sports field, Jimmy
asked Alex if she would be prepared to help in his plan. Alex was reluctant
at first, but when she realized that she herself would not be involved, she
agreed. It took him fifteen minutes to go over what he wanted her to
explain to her elder sister who worked in Dalton ’s,
the fashion shop before she finally agreed. Her only question was
that Dalton ’s weren’t having a sale, but Jimmy
explained that Dalton ’s
always had huge signs in their windows declaring a sale. Alex nodded her
agreement, then stipulated that for her contribution to his plan, he had to
promise to be taken on a real date; to a place of her time and
choosing. Jimmy nodded and reluctantly agreed.
That afternoon Jimmy met up with Jenifer and talked
through a theory of his about ordering food and things online and having them
delivered. After a few minutes, Jenifer became suspicious and asked
him what he was up to? Jimmy explained what he had in mind. When he
had finished, she readily agreed to help. Her weekend job at ECHO
was to consolidate all the orders taken during the week, including all the last
minute orders or things forgotten from the original lists; cost them, check
credit card payment details, then organize the drops for the following week.
The last thing Jimmy asked her was to make sure the McGregor’s got their
delivery on Friday morning, the thirteenth. Jenifer smiled and
nodded and when she left, was already working out her part of the plan.
It wasn’t until the end of the school day that Jimmy
caught up with Frankie and his brother Louis. They talked for about
half an hour about the plan. Jimmy kept emphasizing the need for
timing. After some impressive bargaining, Jimmy agreed that if Frankie pulled
off the task, he would reluctantly give him his card collection of the
Brazilian football team; Jimmy thought the trade-off was worth it.
On the way home, he caught up with Mark, a timid boy
who had a stutter and was in the year below Jimmy. Mark had fallen
prey to Thriftwood and her bullies on many occasions. After a few
minutes, Mark agreed to participate in the plan. Jimmy wasn’t after
the direct services of young Mark, but his elder brother, who worked for the
local gazette. Jimmy promised he would let Mark know when and where
his brother should be if he wanted to get an exclusive.
Saturday morning, after his paper round, Jimmy dropped
his bike outside the newspaper shop, then walked along the depressing row of
shops on the High Street, many already closed down and boarded up due to lack
of customers or rents being too high. When he reached the narrow alleyway next
to the Betting Shop, he slipped down into the darkness and the smells of another
world. He knew, like any street-wise kid, that on Saturday, just
after mid-day, Josh would be in one of the garages selling his Kentucky Blue or
Mexican Red tablets to those who wish to really enjoy their Saturday night
rave, which was coming up next Saturday.
As he came up to the entrance of one of the dimly lit
garages, a tall black kid who had hatred in his eyes, intercepted him.
“What the hell do you want ya, little runt?”
“I want a word with my mate Josh.” And went to push
past the guard.
The black kid grabbed Jimmy by his hair and yanked him
up against the wall. Jimmy yelled out in pain. Suddenly
Josh appeared.
“Leave him be Bert. He’s a friend.”
Jimmy straightened his hair then nodded to the back of
the garage, indicating that he wanted to speak.
“Thanks, Josh, can I ask a favour?”
“Sure, what is it?”
I want you to set-up a real nasty piece of work at
school, you know full blow drugs raid at school and her home torn to pieces.”
Josh studied the litter strewn floor of the garage,
then looked up at him. “Who is it? Do I know her?”
“Yes. Her name is Philippa McGregor. If I’m
not mistaken, her Dad was the guy who blew the whistle on Barry last
year. He claims to be an upstanding man of the local community, but
he’s a crook, always on the take. If he can be dragged down as well, all the
better. Oh, and can you lay your hands on a couple of stolen credit cards?”
Josh nodded to confirm he knew who McGregor was. “Give
me a couple of days notice to set things up.” They spoke for ten
minutes, going over details whilst the big black kid stood guard at the
entrance. When he was done, Jimmy thanked Josh and left, nodding to
the black kid as though he was family.
At Sunday School, Jimmy made a point of sitting next
to Padma, an Indian girl whose family lived five doors down on the same street
as he did and were Christians. He liked her because she sometimes helped him
with his homework. When they broke up into groups, Jimmy asked if he
could have a chat with her after. With a puzzled look on her face,
Padma agreed.
They sat on the benches in the church courtyard and
talked quietly for a bit. He could see from the expression on her
face that she did not like what he was proposing, but when she weighed up the brutal
racist treatment, she had received from Rashi Mohammad and her friend Smith,
she agreed. As she left the bench she turned and told him in no
uncertain terms that he had to make absolutely sure the plan would
work. Jimmy stood, crossed his heart as a promise “Hope to die.”
Copyright Bob French
Wonder if he will? Intriguing plot with lots of characters. Can't wait to find out how it holds together.
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