Imaginarium
By Dawn Van Win
And at
eventide
Shall we
wander
Through vast
avenues
In storage
vaults
Where life’s
river leads
Larger still
Than all of
Amazonian facilities
Our warehouse
Of abandoned
dreams
The countless
possibilities
Of who we
someday
Could have
been
A slowly
reverent walk
Down dusty
halls
Shelves
stacked to the sky
Down either
side
Then gently
reaching out
Our hands
Caress the
edges,
Shapes and
forms
The
bittersweet sting
Of smiling
tears
Remembering
so many years
Of ‘some
day’, ‘one day’
When work is
done
Can we attend
then
To this sum
Of all that
is
Our Life’s
true calling
Held within
This moment’s
mourning
Perhaps our
fingers
Chance upon
A dangling
thread
Unravelling
A breadcrumb
trail
To start the
search
Into a
box
Left on a
shelf
Refusing
there
To be
abandoned
This dream
still flickers
And calls our
name
Wipe tears
away
Find packing
knife
Unwrap the
box
That holds
your life
Copyright
Dawn Van Win
Yes it means something, to me and to many others. The jumble of our life, adequately displayed in your submitted picture. It all goes together formally trapping a life in amber. Good poignant writing...
ReplyDeleteFirstly I must congratulate you on this wonderful poem. (a long time coming but worth the wait) I like the short lines and stanzas creating a rhythmic read without the need of punctuation. I love the picture too. as Len has pointed out I would think most persons reading this will be nodding their heads in agreement. Full of wonderful phrasing just one typing error "unraveling" and one word I would change. A poem you should be proud of, very well written.
ReplyDeleteDescriptive of the pathos of lives alive and dead - a lovely poem.
ReplyDeleteSo beautifully written Dawn.
ReplyDeleteVery evocative
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