Brothers
By Jane Scoggins
John was running late and
it bothered him. He was a stickler for timekeeping, but today the public
transport system had got the better of him. He knew his brother would not mind,
as unlike him, Ray had never been a stickler for time, and would not be
bothered in the slightest that he was running late. Hurrying along as quickly
as his gammy knee would allow, John noticed, that despite nearing the end of
September, gardens were still looking nice with geraniums, begonias and Japanese
anemones still blooming brightly. He must remember to tell Ray. He had always
been a keen gardener. Not so much John, who had preferred sitting in the garden
amongst the flowers. His wife Moira had been the gardener in years past and he
had mowed the lawn. Now they lived in a flat with a balcony, where Moira had
adorned the small space very prettily with hanging baskets in the summer and a
few pots of all-year-round greenery and spring bulbs
John apologised to his brother for being
late. Although he knew it was quite unnecessary, it made him feel better.
''Moira has gone to see her sister and will
come by and pick me up afterwards, I don’t think she will be all that long. We
want to have time for a bit of lunch in town before she goes to the hairdressers.
Our neighbour is having a drinks party to celebrate her 75th
birthday. She is a lovely woman. I probably told you that she lost her husband
last year. They travelled the world together and she misses him a great deal.
Now she doesn’t go further than
Well, brother, I will have to go in a minute as I see Moira coming up the road. She's a bit slow these days but as bright and cheerful as she has always been these past 49 years. Can't believe we will be celebrating our Golden Anniversary next year. We are thinking of going on a cruise. Never done that before, so there will be lots to tell you when we get back. Here she comes up the path so I won't keep her waiting. Oh, I meant to tell you that the gardens are still blooming with geraniums, begonias and those tall pink Japanese anemones. Goodbye then old chap, see you again soon. Getting a bit stiff on this bench now so I will stand up and get going. Moira is waving at me from the gate. Looks like you will be having a bit more company today. I can see a hearse and a cortège approaching and about to come through the cemetery gates. I will wait a minute beside you to pay my respects as they progress. They must be going over the other side of the cemetery nearer the chapel. I can see the vicar now, he’s waiting over there beside a grave. May they, like you dear brother, rest here in peace. God bless you. I miss you”
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Jane Scoggins
A lovely story, starting as a bud and opening like a rose, petal by petal slowly until in full bloom it reveals all... Well written; can't wait for your next.
ReplyDeleteVery touching. Brought a tear to my eye.
ReplyDeleteReading through I wondered why the conversation was "one way" so was not surprised by the ending, I was, however really surprised that West Ham had won! I enjoyed it Jane.
ReplyDeleteYeah Peter that was the curve ball.. not the ending but the West Ham win..ha ha
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