Didn’t you hear me?
Janet Baldey
The heavy oak doors burst open and Leo fled down
the curved white steps. Without
hesitation, he heeled to the left and strode down the street. His mouth was raked into a thin line and
furrows scarred his face. There was just
one thought in his mind, he had to get away from the grey faced men and their
grey voices and away from the few friends who’d attended the hearing, knowing
he couldn’t stomach their clumsy shoulder-pats and embarrassed sympathy. His anger, simmering just below the surface
ever since it happened, flared, and became white-hot. How could she have done this to him? He’d reached his car by now and stood
thumping its roof with fury.
At
last, feeling dead inside, he got into the car.
For a long time, he sat, watching skeletal trees bowing under a
freshening breeze. Slowly, he reached out his hand and switched on the
ignition. Immediately, the husky voice
of his wife’s favourite singer, flooded the car. His hand shot towards the ‘off’ switch but
the damage had been done and his shoulders heaved as he lowered his head onto
the steering wheel.
“Why,
Catherine. Why?”
It
was almost dark by the time he recovered.
He knew he couldn’t return to an empty house, so he headed in the
opposite direction, threading his way through the evening rush hour, out of the
city and onto the coast road.
Suddenly,
the words of her favourite song reverberated in his head….Didn’t I tell you,
I’ll love you forever? Didn’t you hear
me?
They were very young when they first met but he’d
known, almost at first sight, that she was the one. He remembered walking into the church youth
club, intent on having a game of table tennis and a laugh with his mates. Then,
he caught sight of a small, serious-faced girl with a cloud of black hair and
big brown eyes. She reminded him of a
faun, so small, so dark, so silent. He
found himself wanting to protect her. He
squeezed his eyes shut and a fresh wave of guilt washed over him. He’d meant to do his best but at the very
time she’d needed him most, he’d failed her.
At
first, they were happy just to be together.
He remembered one sun-kissed afternoon when they’d ran along the sands
at
All
Catherine had wanted from their marriage was to be a wife and mother. She was not interested in a career; “a real
home bird” his mother had called her.
But that was before; after losing three babies in a row, they’d started
the soul-destroying round of specialist consultations. With every visit, hope leached away and her
happiness faded. At first, he’d been
supportive but as he became more and more caught up in his career, its
distractions followed him home and he failed to notice how pale she was
becoming. All she wanted was to hold her baby; that was
her tragedy and it was also his that he never fully realised how deep her
longing was. She sank into depression,
her spirit languished and she spent long hours sitting alone in silence. Then, the attacks of vertigo and dizziness
began. At first, their GP put it down to
‘nerves’ and offered antidepressants and it was only when she collapsed that
she was taken seriously. When MS was
finally diagnosed, Leo was shocked into realising how far she had
degenerated. At long last, a surge of
tenderness welled and he’d folded her slight figure in his arms.
“Don’t
worry darling. I’ll always be here to
look after you,” he’d said.
Didn’t
you hear me? Evidently, she hadn’t. He’d come back from work one day, opened the
front door and immediately felt the emptiness.
Pounding up the stairs, he burst into their bedroom only to find her
limp body prostrate on the bed, her dark hair a curtain covering her face and
an empty bottle of pills upended on the floor.
Leo knew he couldn’t live without her. Moving slowly, he raised the sail, heard the snap of the canvas as the wind took it and saw it billowing ghostly in the moonlight. He nodded, bad weather was forecast and that would suit his purpose. He cast off from the jetty and hauled on the tiller. Without bothering to switch on his navigation lights, he set off and as he did, the first squall of icy rain slapped him full in the face.
Copyright Janet
Baldey
So descriptive, you paint a complete picture, well written.
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