A Bouquet of Flowers
By Jane Scoggins
It had been a hot day, and
even at 6pm, it was still very warm. He arrived at her flat hoping his best
shirt still looked crisp and fresh and didn’t look sweaty. He was glad he had
decided on the flowers and not the chocolates. The blooms were beautiful and
expensive. He was sure she would love them. Their relationship was just taking
shape and he hoped was becoming more serious. He wanted to continue to impress
her. He had never had a girlfriend he felt so much for. The blinds were down at
her downstairs apartment window keeping out the remaining heat of the day, and
the window was open. He could hear her on the phone laughing and chatting to a
girlfriend. He decided to wait a few minutes rather than ring the bell and have her tell her
friend to hang on while she opened the door. He wanted to see her face when she
saw the bouquet without any distractions to spoil the impact. He wasn’t much into girly stuff so was not
interested in the content of their chat, but couldn't help hearing her say
very animatedly
“He is gorgeous. I wish he was mine. Eyes to
die for. Snuggling up would be divine. No, you are right, my Mum probably
wouldn't approve, so I won't tell her. It's time I had a bit of something to
liven things up for me and keep me on my toes. What about John? I hadn't
thought about him to be honest. Like it or not he will just have to accept any
decision I make. Yes, I do like him a
lot but I wouldn't say we are a proper
couple yet. I think it best I spend time with Ben first and get to know him
better.”
John wished he hadn't heard the conversation,
It had made him realise his worst fears that Caroline was playing with his
affections. He felt deflated, unworthy of her. Punching above his weight. Of
course, he knew she was popular and had admirers. And he with his pebble
spectacles and his less than trendy gear just couldn’t compete. He should have
realised sooner he was on a fools errand. He turned to go with the sound of
Caroline's lovely voice fading as he walked back down the path and towards the
bus stop.
So he didn't hear the remaining telephone
conversation.
“ I must go now Liz. John is coming round
this evening and I need to freshen up, get changed, and put on a bit of makeup.
He may not be my usual type, but he is growing on me. He is so kind, funny and
intelligent. I didn't think we had much in common at first but the more I get
to know him and his quirky self, the more I like him. I am beginning to realise
that maybe all those other blokes I've been involved with were not for me after
all. He said he was not really a doggy person but if I do decide to take on
Ben, I'm sure he will be fine. Having a bouncy puppy to take on walks and
cuddle up to on the sofa, may be what
we both need to bring a bit of fun and zing to our budding relationship. So
bye, for now. I will let you know how I get on”
On the way home John made two decisions. To
give the bouquet of flowers to his Gran, and to accept the offer of the job in
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Jane Scoggins
A masterly flash fiction. Contains all the elements of a story in miniature. Well done...
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