Emotions ~ homework (Flash fiction 600 words)
By Len Morgan
I saw Michelle in Tesco’s today. I thought I’d put all of that behind me. I thought I was free of her; I’d cried until I was all drained out; I felt empty, yet every time I thought of her, tears leaked from my eyes again, and my brain became overwhelmed by the hurt and anger. After ten months, I thought she couldn’t possibly hurt me any more. But, the pain still returns every time I think of her, thoughts and memories are things I now have to guard against.Then in Tesco’s she looked directly at me, her expression was blank, there was no recognition in her eyes. We’d been a couple for two years, then she met her Ex, Bruce, and it was as if we’d never met, never shared our private secrets, never shared intimate moments of love.
She didn’t tell me she was breaking up with me, she just stopped answering my calls, never explained that I was just an infatuation, just cut me off! Pictures of us together were deleted from her ‘Face Book Page’ replaced by pictures of her, Bruce, and their child. That was before she blocked me completely from her face book. I watched her as she left the store; Bruce was outside with the baby in a buggy.
After nine months, in limbo I thought I was
over her. I even believed I could start
dating someone else, but now I’m crying myself to sleep again. It didn’t help when I met her friend Valerie
who mentioned that she’d met Michelle in the high street. She said Michelle had a baby in a buggy, she looked
pale and had a bruise on her cheek. Then Valerie delivered the killer blow, she
said the baby was the spitting image of me…
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Len Morgan

Very raw and well written. It’s one of those stories which is much bigger than its word count. It leaves you wanting to know more.
ReplyDeleteVery good Len!
This sounds suspiciously like autobiography, it is that convincingly written.
ReplyDeleteIntriguing stuff Len, entertaining and to the point, can I assume it's not true? (Joking of course!)
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