BEST LAID PLANS
Richard Banks
It should not
have happened in this way
He never meant
to go astray
The map he had
that showed the trail
to village
near, down hill to vale,
did not! at
least that’s what he thought,
or could it be
he was at fault.
Its lines and
signs he misconceived
and after dusk
could not be see’d
He wandered
lost from field through wood,
to marshy heath
but to no good.
His walking
tour had gone all wrong,
a journey short
had stretched to long.
Caught in
brambles, fell into burn,
from bad to
worse at every turn.
Then dawn did
break and with the light
he found
himself within plain sight
of village he
had set-out from.
The people
there who thought him gone,
did wonder at
his sorry state.
Whatever could
have been his fate,
his muddied
boots, his coat all torn
and on his face
a look, careworn.
What doeth here
they now did think
as he on bench
did weary sink
and not to rise
’til bus came by
to take him
where his feet had tried.
Copyright Richard Banks

very amusing Richard, if strained in places; but that's just part of the fun!
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ReplyDelete13 stanzas each containing a rhyming couplet, rhythm good throughout the message humorous maybe the odd word too. Wonderful.
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