The Hit (Flash 300 words)
By Richard Banks
In less than two hours he
would be away to
Weeks of meticulous planning had secured him this room with
a view. On a Saturday afternoon it was empty of all those who worked there, as
were the other offices in the block. The room was on the third floor, at his
preferred elevation, the sun at his back. He unpacked his briefcase of the
disconnected parts within, reassembling them with a quick fingered dexterity he
often practised with eyes tight shut. He was in the zone, pulse beating at a
steady fifty-five.
He raised the blind a few inches and pushed open the window,
he would fire from within the building unseen by anyone looking up into the
dazzle of the sun. All that was needed now was the correct alignment, the
target to appear in the expected place, at the expected time. Due 2pm at the
Embassy he would be leaving the hotel by the front entrance no later than 1.45,
walking briskly across the wide pavement into the safety of a bullet proof car.
There would be two, maybe three seconds in which to take aim and fire.
Through the tinted glass doors of the hotel he could see dark shapes gathering for the off. Outside a limousine was gliding into place. The hotel door opened and out came the target with his minders. He aimed centre forehead. One shot only, and it was done.
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Richard Banks

Succinct to a point, can you confirm the HIT took place in the UK prior to his flight?
ReplyDeleteVery powerful story, written with great economy of words. It’s one of those stories which evokes vivid pictures in few words. No need for the narrator to explain.
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