Shisan – Cobblestone Path
Included is the collaborative poem discussed on Wednesday’s zoom.
I thought it could
be of interest to the group to see yet another strand of poetry.
It would be
helpful if all of this email could be put on the blog, as people can better understand
the format etc.
I have sought
permissions from the other writers for it to be published and all are happy to
be included.
The poem has
recently been published in “Presence”,
I look forward to
seeing the outcome.
Best wishes
Rob
Cobblestone Path (12 verse Shisan)
cobblestone path
a view of blossoms
with every step mv
children play leapfrog
in the new grass ms
winding down
with smooth jazz
and a bubble bath
po
the last nut in place
on the cloudbusting machine rk
she tells me
she’s a dominatrix
over ice cream sundaes mv
since the mastectomy
they’ve slept in separate rooms po
plate boundaries
shifting along the fault lines
of the East-African Rift
ms
the mutant crickets’
soundless wings
rk
moonlight
has silvered
all the daytime colors
ms
graffiti artists
share a cigarette
mv
the Pope again
asks Michelangelo
when it will end
rk
a wedge of swans
above a withered field
po
mv - Maureen Virchau (USA), ms - Mary Stevens (USA), po - Polona
Oblak (sabaki - Leader) (
renku is a collaborative poem generally taken on when a
group of poets meet. Formally named rengay, it as been around in
Each poets can either take turns or the sabaki (leader) chooses
from supplied verses.
Dependant on length of poem, they range between 12 and 36
generally, but can be upwards of a thousand verses. Each verse, be it three or
two lines follows a table of events and must link to the previous verse, whilst
shifting away from the previous. The events generally include at least one
blossom or flower verse, a moon verse, two love verses , with the rest
being non seasonal verses. The opening verse is from where haiku originated.
Separated out by Basho.
The poem is divided into 4 sections, with each section
traditionally being written on one folded side of a piece of paper.
Shisan |
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The Shisan - 12 verses - A Description |
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The Shisan is a twelve verse sequence
consisting of four movements of three verses each. The movements are treated
as preface, development part one, development part two, and rapid close. To
the extent that the four part division is taken to reflect that of the kasen,
the shisan also lays claim to the topical and tonal characteristics of the
jo-ha-kyu pacing paradigm. The word shisan may
be read in several ways. Primarily shi means four,
and san means three.
When written in kanji shi may read as tamawari - something
bestowed - and san as bansankai - a formal meal. The
suggestion is that participants are invited to a significant occasion -
reflecting the expectation that all will respect the finer points of style. |
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side
1 |
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autumn |
autumn |
spring |
spring |
summer |
winter |
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hokku |
au mn |
au |
sp bl |
sp [mn] |
su |
wi |
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wakiku |
au |
au |
sp |
sp [mn] |
su/ns |
wi/ns |
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daisan |
ns |
ns |
ns |
ns |
ns |
ns |
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side 2 |
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4 short |
ns/wi |
wi/ns [mn] |
ns/su lv |
ns/su |
ns |
ns |
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5 long |
wi/ns |
ns/wi [mn] |
su/ns lv |
su/ns |
au mn |
sp bl |
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6 short |
ns |
ns |
ns |
ns |
au |
sp |
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side 3 |
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7 long |
ns/sp [bl] |
ns/sp lv |
ns/au [mn] |
ns/au |
ns |
ns lv |
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8 short |
sp |
sp lv |
au |
au lv |
wi/ns lv |
su/ns lv |
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9 long |
sp/ns [bl] |
sp/ns |
au/ns [mn] |
au/ns lv |
ns/wi lv |
ns/su |
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side 4 |
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10 short |
ns lv |
ns |
ns |
ns |
ns |
ns |
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11 long |
su/ns lv |
su/ns [fl] |
wi/ns |
wi/ns [fl] |
sp bl |
au mn |
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ageku |
ns/su |
ns/su [fl] |
ns/wi |
ns/wi [fl] |
sp |
au |
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Not s |
su/ns - (wakiku only) - where the hokku is summer, wakiku may be
non-season |
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