Tuesday, 14 July 2020

Garden Magic



Garden Magic #1                 

By Dawn Van Win                                    

Seeds resting in
A furrow deep

Awaken from
Resplendent sleep

Soft rain falls gently
From above

And beckons life
To grow
In love


Copyright Dawn Van Win


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3 comments:

  1. Lenm39314 July 2020 at 10:11

    Simple sentiments, well presented, thank you for sharing. Your watercolour is also representative of summer...

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  2. Starling14 July 2020 at 14:02

    I enjoyed your short poem, lovely picture, both compliment each other.

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  3. peter woodgate14 July 2020 at 17:57

    I am intrigued Dawn.Are both painting and poem titled "Garden Magic?" Whilst the poem, in nice neat verse, is immediately understood, the painting begs individual interpretation. My thoughts,and they are simply mine, are that the poem with 3 stanzas instead of four, but retaining the seeds journey,would
    give "ME" a title of "Three Steps to Heaven." Just my thoughts Dawn but I loved it anyway.

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